19 Aralık 2010 Pazar

CAUSE AND EFFECT

I was born in Denizli so Denizli is my hometown but it has many problems like other cities.One of the biggest problem is air pollution in Denizli.Air pollution is important problem for us because air pollution rates are too high in Denizli.In this point, there are some questions. Why is the air pollution problem in Denizli or what causes air pollution in Denizli? People have been using fossil fuels to heat, to cook their foods… in Denizli because there arent any option for them such us natural gas, solar power… etc. In the beginning, using fossil fuels seem very good because nobody knows their effects.While fossils fuels are burning, carbon dioxide comes outs.This carbon dioxide causes decreasing oxygen rates in the air.In fact nature is like chain.If you break one of rings in the chain, the chain can diffuse completely.We can say that main reason of air polution is using fossil fules in Denizli but there are many reasons too.

Other reason of air pollution is transportation.In these days everybody have their own cars so air pollution is increasing by day by.You can say that how can trasnportation affect air pollution.Carbon dioxide comes out while we are driving our cars so gas of exhaust pollutes air.

Sand!Another reason of air pollution is sand.There are many sand particle in the air in Denizli.I can say that Denizli is famous for its sand.Rate of sand particle is too high and this situation is effecting air pollution in Denizli.

In conclusin There are many reason of air pollution in Denizli such as using fossil fuels, gas of exhaust or sand and other reason.They are not important, in fact basic reason is human so we are the basic reason of air pollution.Lastly we need to stop air pollution as soon as possible…

Mehmet AKTAŞ

2 yorum:

  1. hi mehmet !
    organisation and content is good and i like your topic it is really big problem in Denizli.. but i think your introduction is a bit longer than other paragraph.. anyway thanks for writing..

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  2. hi mehmet !
    organisation and content is good and i like your topic it is really big problem in Denizli.. but i think your introduction is a bit longer than other paragraph.. anyway thanks for writing..

    YanıtlaSil