CRIME(Revised)

What causes people to commit crime?Why do people need to commit crime?These are really important questions.We must thinhk of these question's answersCrime ratings increasing by day by.In fact this stuation has some reasons.
The first reason is lack of education.Most of criminals are uneducated people because they dont know good or bad exactly.Uneducated people can commit crime more easily than educated peole because they need to learn good or bad so education is important.Maybe education can fix some of these problems.Thanks to education we can reduce crime ratings.
The second reason is psychological problems.Criminals, who have some psychological problems, are really common.In my opinion all criminals have some psychological problems because psychological problems push people to commit crime.Criminals who have some psychological problems can continue to commit crime after prison.If we want to stop them, they need treatment because of their psychological problems.
The other reason can be friend or habits.It doesn't matter.Crime is a big problem and some people commit crime in some ways.If we educate them about crime, we can reduce crime ratings.I think education is important in this subject and we need it to reduce crimes. Written by Mehmet AKTAŞ

MARRIAGE (Revised)

I think marriage is an important company but selection of a partner is more important.There are some problems such as marrying somebody from another country.
In my opinion marriage somebody from another country can be cause of some problems.The first problem is language problem.Language is a very important step in marriage.Language differences affect partner's communication and so this situation damages marriage.
The second problem is opinion differences so this can affect marriage badly.For a good marriage, partners have to be well in with eachother.The last problem and the most importat problem is culture differences.I think our expectations, our opinions, our styles are different.All these problems damage the structure of marriage.when we think all these problems, marriage somebody from another country isn't good thing.We must think our futures and we need to be carefull before choosing our partners.
I think marriage somebody from another contry is unnecessary because there are a lot of people to marry in our contry.We don't need to import a partner to marry.
Written by Mehmet AKTAŞ

WHAT CAUSE A VOLCANO ERUPTION (process analysis)

Volcano eruption is natural event so we may not guess when it will happen.When volcano eruption happens it affects people's life negatively and it damages many thinhg immediately.Well there is a question."What cause a volcano eruption?"
Firstly, when a volcano eruption happens the most dangerous thing is lava blow because lava damages everythimg on its way.After lava blow it is hard to stop it.Maybe we can change its way but whatever we do, we cant stop it.Lava damages people, animals, trees, buildings, gardens, parks...etc.Lava can cause of deaths because it happend immediately and lava moves fast so we may not have time to escape.In fact before the volcano eruption,volcano gives signals but after eruption everything can be late.Lava isn't only danger, there are many danger.
Secondly another effect is tufa.In fact we can say it, tufa effect.Tufa is kind of dust cloud but tufa is more dangerous than dust.Tufa can reach other places thanks to winds.After volcano eruption, tufa clouds diffuse large areas, so tufa doesn't affect only volcano are.Tufa causes air pollution so all flights and maritme matters can call off.This is volcano's undirect effect on people.
Thirdly volcano eruption damages environment.this situation affects people and animals.People and animals lose their homes because environment is home of people and animals.Volcano eruption effect can continue long time and it is hard to fix after it because when volcano eruption happens, environment pollution occurs.We can say this situation has link with lava and tufa.Environment pollution is not last effect of volcano eruption.Volcano eruption changes people's life but this changing is in a bad way.
At last volcano eruption affects all things negatively on its way.There are a hopeless point.It is fact that we cant predict volcano eruption before it happens.Volcano eruption always occurs so we must be ready.

MY HOMETOWN(DESCRİPTİVE)

Hometown, hometon.What is hometown?I dont know its reason but hometown is different from other place.I was born in Denizli's city center but in fact my real hometown is Denizli/Kızılcabölük.
Kızılcabölük is a small town and it is not crowded contrary to cities.My hometown has narrow and long roads.While you are walking, you will see that almost everywhere is greeen in my hometown because there are many gardens,parks...etc in road's right and left sides.I believe that if you go to my hometown you will feel very relax because there are not noise in my hometown.You can hear only birds songs.Maybe there aren't many place to visit but my hometown is very nice place for me.If you like silence and nature, you will like my hometown too.You need to visit my hometownt to understand me.
In conclusion, one day if you want to visit my hometown, you will like there.I'm sure that you will not regret and you will want to stay long time.