19 Aralık 2010 Pazar

CAUSE AND EFFECT

I was born in Denizli so Denizli is my hometown but it has many problems like other cities.One of the biggest problem is air pollution in Denizli.Air pollution is important problem for us because air pollution rates are too high in Denizli.In this point, there are some questions. Why is the air pollution problem in Denizli or what causes air pollution in Denizli? People have been using fossil fuels to heat, to cook their foods… in Denizli because there arent any option for them such us natural gas, solar power… etc. In the beginning, using fossil fuels seem very good because nobody knows their effects.While fossils fuels are burning, carbon dioxide comes outs.This carbon dioxide causes decreasing oxygen rates in the air.In fact nature is like chain.If you break one of rings in the chain, the chain can diffuse completely.We can say that main reason of air polution is using fossil fules in Denizli but there are many reasons too.

Other reason of air pollution is transportation.In these days everybody have their own cars so air pollution is increasing by day by.You can say that how can trasnportation affect air pollution.Carbon dioxide comes out while we are driving our cars so gas of exhaust pollutes air.

Sand!Another reason of air pollution is sand.There are many sand particle in the air in Denizli.I can say that Denizli is famous for its sand.Rate of sand particle is too high and this situation is effecting air pollution in Denizli.

In conclusin There are many reason of air pollution in Denizli such as using fossil fuels, gas of exhaust or sand and other reason.They are not important, in fact basic reason is human so we are the basic reason of air pollution.Lastly we need to stop air pollution as soon as possible…

Mehmet AKTAŞ

25 Ekim 2010 Pazartesi

We watched two movies as homework last week, Angela's Ashes 1999 and The Miracle Worker 1962.In my opinion Angela's Ashes was better than The Miracle Worker.Angela's Ashes was more effective on me so i can say that i like Angela's Ashes.The films which we watched last week was very impressive.If i compare them The Miracle Worker is a good example of people who have disabilities but subject of Angela's Ashes is better.Angela's Ashes is longer than The Miracle Worker but i enjoyed Angela's Ashes while i was watching it. The Miracle Worker is too old film and in black-white format. Maybe beacuse of them i didn't like it.In conclusion both of them are really excellent work.I am glad to watch them.
Mehmet AKTAŞ

25 Mayıs 2010 Salı

CRIME(Revised)

What causes people to commit crime?Why do people need to commit crime?These are really important questions.We must thinhk of these question's answersCrime ratings increasing by day by.In fact this stuation has some reasons.
The first reason is lack of education.Most of criminals are uneducated people because they dont know good or bad exactly.Uneducated people can commit crime more easily than educated peole because they need to learn good or bad so education is important.Maybe education can fix some of these problems.Thanks to education we can reduce crime ratings.
The second reason is psychological problems.Criminals, who have some psychological problems, are really common.In my opinion all criminals have some psychological problems because psychological problems push people to commit crime.Criminals who have some psychological problems can continue to commit crime after prison.If we want to stop them, they need treatment because of their psychological problems.
The other reason can be friend or habits.It doesn't matter.Crime is a big problem and some people commit crime in some ways.If we educate them about crime, we can reduce crime ratings.I think education is important in this subject and we need it to reduce crimes. Written by Mehmet AKTAŞ

MARRIAGE (Revised)

I think marriage is an important company but selection of a partner is more important.There are some problems such as marrying somebody from another country.
In my opinion marriage somebody from another country can be cause of some problems.The first problem is language problem.Language is a very important step in marriage.Language differences affect partner's communication and so this situation damages marriage.
The second problem is opinion differences so this can affect marriage badly.For a good marriage, partners have to be well in with eachother.The last problem and the most importat problem is culture differences.I think our expectations, our opinions, our styles are different.All these problems damage the structure of marriage.when we think all these problems, marriage somebody from another country isn't good thing.We must think our futures and we need to be carefull before choosing our partners.
I think marriage somebody from another contry is unnecessary because there are a lot of people to marry in our contry.We don't need to import a partner to marry.
Written by Mehmet AKTAŞ

20 Mayıs 2010 Perşembe

WHAT CAUSE A VOLCANO ERUPTION (process analysis)

Volcano eruption is natural event so we may not guess when it will happen.When volcano eruption happens it affects people's life negatively and it damages many thinhg immediately.Well there is a question."What cause a volcano eruption?"
Firstly, when a volcano eruption happens the most dangerous thing is lava blow because lava damages everythimg on its way.After lava blow it is hard to stop it.Maybe we can change its way but whatever we do, we cant stop it.Lava damages people, animals, trees, buildings, gardens, parks...etc.Lava can cause of deaths because it happend immediately and lava moves fast so we may not have time to escape.In fact before the volcano eruption,volcano gives signals but after eruption everything can be late.Lava isn't only danger, there are many danger.
Secondly another effect is tufa.In fact we can say it, tufa effect.Tufa is kind of dust cloud but tufa is more dangerous than dust.Tufa can reach other places thanks to winds.After volcano eruption, tufa clouds diffuse large areas, so tufa doesn't affect only volcano are.Tufa causes air pollution so all flights and maritme matters can call off.This is volcano's undirect effect on people.
Thirdly volcano eruption damages environment.this situation affects people and animals.People and animals lose their homes because environment is home of people and animals.Volcano eruption effect can continue long time and it is hard to fix after it because when volcano eruption happens, environment pollution occurs.We can say this situation has link with lava and tufa.Environment pollution is not last effect of volcano eruption.Volcano eruption changes people's life but this changing is in a bad way.
At last volcano eruption affects all things negatively on its way.There are a hopeless point.It is fact that we cant predict volcano eruption before it happens.Volcano eruption always occurs so we must be ready.

MY HOMETOWN(DESCRİPTİVE)

Hometown, hometon.What is hometown?I dont know its reason but hometown is different from other place.I was born in Denizli's city center but in fact my real hometown is Denizli/Kızılcabölük.
Kızılcabölük is a small town and it is not crowded contrary to cities.My hometown has narrow and long roads.While you are walking, you will see that almost everywhere is greeen in my hometown because there are many gardens,parks...etc in road's right and left sides.I believe that if you go to my hometown you will feel very relax because there are not noise in my hometown.You can hear only birds songs.Maybe there aren't many place to visit but my hometown is very nice place for me.If you like silence and nature, you will like my hometown too.You need to visit my hometownt to understand me.
In conclusion, one day if you want to visit my hometown, you will like there.I'm sure that you will not regret and you will want to stay long time.

11 Mart 2010 Perşembe

CRIME

What causes people to commit crime? Why do people need to commit crime? These are really important questions. We must think that these questions' answers.Crime ratings are getting increase by day by.In fact this situation has some reasons.
I think first reason is lack of education.Most of guilties are uneducated people because they don't know good or bad excatly. Uneducated people can commit crime easier than educated people because they need to learn good and bad so education is important.Thanks to education we can reduce crime ratings.
Second reason is psychological problems.Guilties who have some psychological problems are really common. In my opinion all guilties have some psychological problems because psychological problems push people to commit crime.Guilties who have some psychological problems, can continue to commit crime.If we want to stop them, they need to treat because of psychological problems.
Other reason can be friends or habits.It doesn't matter.Some people commit crime in some ways.If we educate them abou crime,we can reduce crime.I think education is important in this subject.
Written by Mehmet Aktaş